Hayley- I think the app is great, but I feel you struggled a bit with the organization of your thoughts for the pitch itself. You gave a great argument in the beginning about seeing physicians for other issues and gave a great explanation about the app features, but I had trouble following it. Overall, for the first pitch I think it was great. You spoke slowly enough for me to understand you and walked me through how the app would work, which is what I completely left out of my pitch. Hope this helps!
Hayley-
ReplyDeleteI think the app is great, but I feel you struggled a bit with the organization of your thoughts for the pitch itself. You gave a great argument in the beginning about seeing physicians for other issues and gave a great explanation about the app features, but I had trouble following it. Overall, for the first pitch I think it was great. You spoke slowly enough for me to understand you and walked me through how the app would work, which is what I completely left out of my pitch. Hope this helps!